Friday, 26 September 2008

A New Year



We have been extremely busy in 3P already this year. In literacy, we have been looking at story settings. We had to use the following Success Criteria.

To be an engaging writer, we need to:


  • Use adjectives to describe our nouns;


  • Use powerful or juicy words to make our writing interesting;

  • Use our senses to describe what we see, hear, smell, taste or feel.

Here are some examples of our writing.








Aria





Emily




Davina



We went into the environmental area and used it to help us think of some sentences to improve our writing.






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Monday, 15 September 2008